Eva’s eyes snapped open to find the stone surface of the ritual circle, still glowing in a vibrant violet light. She wasn’t sure when she had closed her eyes. A deep rumbling in the ground beneath her feet had pulled her out of her torpor.
Seeing the ritual circle sent a jolt through Eva’s body. She couldn’t believe that she had fallen asleep.
Straining the muscles in her neck, she barely managed to look straight forwards. And her head ached every moment of the way. She only just got to see Catherine, Lucy, and Shelby standing on their spots before she couldn’t take it any more and let her head hang back down against her chest.
Not too much time could have passed. All three were standing. Mostly. Lucy’s lower half wasn’t a cohesive set of legs at the moment. More of a mountain made from tentacles that her upper body had perched upon. Catherine might not be the best metric for time passing either, being a demon. Eva wasn’t entirely sure about the stamina of a succubus. Maybe she would have collapsed from exhaustion eventually. However, Eva fully believed that Catherine had the stamina to remain standing for days.
Shelby was the real metric. She was a human. Not even an athletic one at that. Standing in one place for hours on end was absolute hell on the feet. Possible, easily, but Eva imagined that she would be shifting her weight side to side every few seconds.
Though it was somewhat odd that she was standing. Most everyone had chosen to kneel before they had started up the ritual. Save for Genoa and Catherine.
Perhaps some time had passed.
The sky would be a much better metric, but it had been a struggle just to tilt her head back enough to see Shelby’s waist. She couldn’t tell from the lighting thanks to the light of the ritual circle. The violet drowned out all the surrounding light.
It took a moment for Eva to realize her stupidity.
Blood coated every inch of her body. Blood that she controlled. A simple thought had her head wrenching back to allow her a sight-line of the sky.
Had the muscles in her jaw not been slack already, she would have started gaping.
Obviously she wouldn’t be able to stare at the sky. The portals were still overhead, blocking her view with the giant eyeball of Life.
Gone were the lush forests brimming with life, rivers, and mountains. The core pupil—the portions she had originally thought had been a planet before realizing the wider scope—had darkened to an almost pitch black. Deep veins of red ran across the entire surface. Eva couldn’t say if it was molten lava, blood, or merely some mystical energy. Concentrated streams of magic, or the like.
One thing was certain. It pooled near the corners of the eye. As she watched it gather, a thick droplet fell, rushing straight towards the portals.
It passed through without resistance, becoming a flaming meteor at some point. The thing crashed down somewhere in the distance, bathing the surrounding land in light brighter than the day for a mere few seconds.
The light went out almost instantly. Juliana, perhaps. Or perhaps whatever fueled the flames simply exhausted itself. Burnt out or couldn’t exist in the mortal realm. Eva supposed it didn’t matter.
If one hit them, or even Brakket Academy, the city, or anywhere else around, it might matter a bit more.
In fact, it looked like a few had hit. The trees near the ritual circle had gone up in flames since she last looked. Extinguished now, but the damage had been done. Spires of charcoal dotted the edge of the circle.
Beneath the eye, her treatment ritual circle still hovered overhead. Which shouldn’t have happened. She had been holding up the blood through her own will. Passing out should have destroyed it. And probably the primary ritual circle at that when the falling blood splattered over it.
But it hadn’t. It clung to the air like a spiderweb between trees.
A dripping spiderweb made from oil, that was. The drips didn’t hit the ritual circle. One dropped from the treatment circle until it was about level with Eva’s head whereupon it darted straight towards her and splashed across her already blood-covered cheek.
The droplet didn’t stay there. Pretending gravity didn’t exist, it beaded up and rolled along her cheek until it reached the top of her head. There it clung for just a moment—apparently gravity was fine to ignore but surface tension wasn’t—before flinging off the top of her head to rejoin the treatment circle overhead.
It wasn’t just the one droplet. The treatment circle created a sort of black rain for a decent radius around Eva with a near constant leak of blood back up to the upper level. Like a leaky faucet. She wasn’t sure what it looked like from the outside, but Eva found it exceptionally eerie. Especially because she wasn’t controlling the blood. Not even subconsciously, as far as she could tell. Trying to hold the blood up and keep it from dripping failed as did attempting to stop it from rejoining with the treatment circle.
In retrospect, it was a good thing she hadn’t been able to stop it.
The treatment was still ongoing. Essence flowed through the tubes.
Eva forced her head to turn towards the Avatar of Void. The significantly smaller avatar.
It didn’t have much in the way of a head anymore. Or even an upper body. The tube she had sent out to take the place of the intravenous tubes used during her own treatment circle wafted back and forth. Smoke disappeared into the tube as it vacuumed it all up.
Watching it slowly disappear felt like a weight in her chest. The smoke, for all she knew, could be all that was left of Arachne. Her body ground to nothing but fine dust under the weight of a Power. Eva wasn’t concerned in the slightest that she was harming Void through her ritual. Even had it not told her that she would be entirely unable to hurt it, she doubted she would care.
In fact, it was almost disappointing that Void wasn’t inhabiting the body at the moment.
If it was, it just might be suffering as much as Life seemed to be.
Ignoring entirely whatever the eye above her was feeling, the Avatar of Life to her other side thrashed and flailed around without stopping. Tentacles waved through the air, impotently attempting to swipe away the treatment circle. The blood simply rippled, moving ever so slightly to avoid every attack. It should have disrupted the magic, but it didn’t. Eva could still feel stuff draining from her body. She wasn’t even sure it was blood anymore.
Speaking of which, the blood tube was another target of the tentacles. Unlike the treatment circle, which just avoided everything the avatar could do to it, the tube broke and shattered every few seconds. Between those breaks, it repaired itself. Every chunk, shard, and grain of dust returned to where it had been as if time itself was rewinding. It wasn’t. Eva could feel her magic pull it back into its original spot—without her input at that—but it looked that way.
More tentacles from the avatar scraped along the surface of the ritual circle, trying to pull itself away. The mass was simply too large. It didn’t budge for as long as Eva watched.
Maybe Life should get a clue and evolve some legs.
And, the mass itself had changed. Where it once had been fleshy in coloration with violet veins, it had mutated to a demonic blood shade of black with vibrant crimson highlights pulsing through it. The single beam of light extending from it to the eye overhead had darkened as well. Eva wasn’t sure how black light worked—given that this wasn’t the ultraviolet kind—but it pierced right into the largest concentration of red up on the massive eye beyond the portals.
Only the tentacles remained their old colors. And that was rapidly changing. It started with the violet veins. One tentacle at a time would turn its violet to red. Then the obsidian skin began creeping up towards the tips.
Frankly, she was surprised its hundreds of mouths weren’t screaming endlessly. Perhaps the gaping maws hadn’t been designed for that and were only capable of consuming. Neither were the mouths eating away at the stone ritual circle itself. Given what had happened to their captured enigma and how much it tried to eat its surroundings, that should have been the first thing it had tried.
Eva found herself somewhat nervous as she finally turned her attentions inwards. Frankly, she hadn’t even considered the possibility that she might die from exsanguinating herself. Sensing what little blood was left in her, that was a real possibility. It might be more surprising that she hadn’t keeled over dead already.
Something was running through her veins. She had a feeling she knew what. Her sense of blood picked it up. It acted like blood enough for her to see it, but only barely. Her heart had the highest concentration of it. A foggy mist of particles swirled around within her heart. Every few seconds, a speed far slower than normal, her heart would pump and the particles would explode through her body. Most of it wound up leaving her body through the tube that led towards Life.
The tips of Eva’s fingers twitched. Applying pressure, she found herself able to fully flex her hands. The process took more labor than normal, but it was an improvement over hanging limp.
The treatment must have been drawing to a close. That might have been what had woken her up in the first place.
Still, she was locked in place for a few minutes before she managed to crick her neck from side to side of her own accord. Another minute and she managed to roll her shoulders and pull back her wings, standing on her own two feet.
Raindrops of blood continued to fall around her, but not quite at the same rate that they had been when she first awoke. Where before it may have been something like a monsoon, now it was a light drizzle.
For the moment, Eva was content to merely watch the blood fall. The avatar wasn’t actually targeting her with its flailing. Though there were some streaks of violet blood splattered around Eva’s circle. Perhaps it had tried at one point and either Eva’s unconscious mind had protected her or Juliana had. One or the other. It was a good thing that none of the blood splatters had interfered with the primary ritual circle.
Her treatment circle probably would have continued, but who knew if anything more would have happened. When the ritual circle had failed earlier, both avatars fell dormant. She would have been treating the Life-less husk of the avatar and not the eye overhead along with it.
That hadn’t happened. So, for the moment at least, she was content. At least until she managed to regain enough control over her body to turn around.
More blood splatters littered the ritual circle. Most centered around the avatar. Most violet in color.
But not all.
A sizable, albeit thin splattering of blood glazed over a section of the ritual near where Shalise had been standing. Had being the key word. She wasn’t there anymore. Juliana had taken her spot. To the side, Genoa looked rather like she had been thrown into a laundry machine filled with rocks.
Just what happened while I was out? Where’s Shalise? She tried to shout out. All she got were a few squeaks. Though her jaw was working, her throat just wouldn’t cooperate. Instead, Eva narrowed her eyes at the avatar.
The slowly stilling avatar. Only the tentacles high up on its body, the ones swinging through the air, were still active. The tentacles that had been trying to drag it off the ritual circle had stilled entirely. Even the moving ones were growing slothful as they changed to a more demonic hue.
Scanning the horizon didn’t help much either. She could see the spot where Juliana had been waiting. Her empty chair. No sign of Shalise. Or Serena, for that matter. The prisoners might still be there, but both had been lower to the ground. She wouldn’t be able to see them all that easily.
Eva ground her teeth together as the drizzle of blood slowed to a stop. At the same time, the last uncorrupted tentacles turned and fell limp next to the mass of flesh. Her treatment ritual collapsed, raining down in jagged shards of solid blood. The shards that hit Eva immediately liquefied and joined with the rest of her body. Everything else sheared straight through the Avatar of Life, the stone ritual circle, and even the stubs of legs were all that remained of Void’s avatar. After being pierced, the stubs dispersed into the air, fading away into nothingness.
The intravenous tubes Eva had created started sucking themselves back towards her. Eva made sure to chop off the end of Life’s tube before it reached her. Even if it was bloated with more demon blood than whatever had been running through its veins before, she didn’t want any of it near her let alone inside her.
Without really meaning to alter them, her wings also melded down into her back. The significant volume of blood they represented didn’t actually seem to add to the rest of it all. She really didn’t know what to think of that, but at the same time, the entire day had been full of things she couldn’t explain. Even discounting the few parts she had known were going to happen.
At the very least, she was just glad it was over. The large portal was still open and meteors were still raining down every now and again, but surely that wouldn’t last. Unless there were another few scratches she needed to make to the ritual circle to activate a third phase. Without Vektul or Void, she wouldn’t know.
Looking towards Catherine, Eva got a hesitant thumbs up. Which was great as far as Eva was concerned. She took a few steps until she was out of the central ring. The moment her feet passed over the line, the violet light of the ritual circle died off. It started at the center, weaving around the entire area like someone erasing the lines of a drawn labyrinth. The thin beam of magic that stretched between the avatar and the eye in the sky faded away as well.
Soon enough, absolute silence descended on the darkened ritual circle.
All at once, as if by some unspoken signal, everyone started to converge on her. Or, every human, at least. None of the demons moved a single muscle. Not even a wiggle of a tentacle from Lucy. Odd, but not so odd. All of them had just seen a sliver of their Power corrupt another Power. A little awe was to be expected.
Because Eva headed straight for Juliana, the two of them met well before anyone else reached Eva. Poor Irene was on the exact opposite end of the circle and had actually started jogging to reach them.
Eva didn’t quite make it into conversational distance before she started speaking.
“Shalise?”
“Don’t worry,” Juliana said with haste, holding her hands in front of her. “She’s… alive.”
“You truly inspire confidence.”
“Oh it was horrible!” Shelby managed to reach them before anyone else thanks to her sprinting across the platform. “Her back! It was bent completely the wrong way! Oh go–” She didn’t quite finish what she was saying. She clasped her hands to her mouth. Retching noises escaped her throat as she turned away.
Eva turned a flat look back to Juliana.
“I fixed her back,” Juliana said as everyone else started to gather. “Probably. I think she’s in the infirmary at the moment. Just in case.”
“Confidence. The tremble in your words speaks volumes of your belief in yourself.”
“What did happen, Juliana?” Genoa’s voice came harsh and cold as she stepped up to the group with her arms crossed over her chest. Her foot tapped against the stone in just such a way that it sent small cracks through the ground.
Considering that it took Eva a fair amount of effort to embed her spiked blood into the ground, that was quite the feat.
“Later mom. It’s… a long story.” Juliana hung her head for just a moment as if ashamed. Eva wasn’t sure why. Summoning Zagan had probably saved everyone’s lives multiple times over today.
“For Shalise,” Juliana continued, “I was keeping an eye on our prisoners when I heard the scream. Without even thinking properly, I inverted her state of injury and, a moment later after confirming Shalise wasn’t broken, inverted her location. She had been not in the school infirmary. Now she is.” She paused again for just a moment as she bit her lip. “Probably. In fact, we should check on her.” Much like Shelby, she clasped a hand over her mouth. “I don’t remember if I was specific! What if she’s in every school infirmary? Is that even possible? There could be hundreds of Shalises out there, all equally confused!”
Juliana turned towards the school as if to run and check. A firm hand came down and crushed her shoulder in a vice grip. “Juliana Laura Rivas…” Genoa said. “I think we need to have a little talk. We can walk to your friend while you tell me everything.”
Hand still squeezing down on Juliana’s shoulder, Genoa started marching her daughter away from their little gathering. She paused for a moment and glanced back towards Eva. “It is done, is it not?”
To that, Eva could do nothing but shrug. “If there is more, I’ll call. Actually,” she paused for just a moment, looking around to all the gathered humans, “you should all go. I can’t imagine that this was a relaxing event. Go rest, sleep, take showers, eat, whatever you fancy. Take a break. We’ll figure out how to get everything back to normal soon enough,” she said with a vague gesture towards Zoe—who was absolutely not dismissed.
“Stick close to Genoa,” Zoe said, backing up Eva’s words. “Things might still be strange.” There was a slight pause as she glanced around. “And has anyone seen Serena?”
“Ah! She mumbled something about needing a drink before Shalise got hit,” Juliana said with only a mild shudder. Her feet shifted back and forth for a moment as she stole a glance at her mother. “I… uh… offered. But she declined. Something about not wanting to risk the sunlight by taking off her bundles of clothes.”
Brushing a hair out of her face, Zoe hummed to herself for a moment before mumbling. “She probably went to find Wayne then.” A little louder, she said, “Alright. Stick together and stay safe.”
With that, the humans left. All except for Irene who paused to steal a glance at the still unmoving Saija. Shelby came up and dragged Irene away by the arm once she noticed that her sister wasn’t following.
Eva just sighed as she turned towards the next most important person around, Zoe. Who rather looked like she wanted to run off and check on Shalise as well.
It was weird. Eva thought she should be more concerned about her friend. Instead, she just felt a bit numb. She had used up all of her care on Arachne earlier in the day. Not to mention the deep exhaustion and slight apathy Eva felt—or didn’t—that probably came from the ritual, Juliana probably worrying for nothing, and Lynn Cross likely knowing who to seek out to heal Shalise’s back if it was still broken. Everything would be fine.
“If you want to go see Shalise too, that’s fine with me. I’m sure Catherine and I can figure out what to do from here.”
“You’re not worried?”
“I trust Juliana.”
Zoe sighed. Her eyes never quite stopped on Eva for any length of time. They kept sliding off to stare at the unmoving avatar, the other humans, and even the demons—who had yet to move from their spots. “What about them?” she said, nodding towards the latter group. “Are they alright?”
Turning around in a full circle, Eva started frowning. Lucy, of all people, hadn’t even twitched. Even if none of them cared to join up and interact with the humans much, Catherine should have approached to discuss the ritual and how they should proceed. Saija wouldn’t even be part of that group. She and Irene were close. But even though Irene had obviously been staring at the succubus with a worried frown, the succubus hadn’t budged to follow the humans away.
Above all, every single one of them was staring.
As Eva turned, she met each of their eyes.
“Great.”
“That didn’t sound like the pleased kind of great…”
“No,” Eva said, turning back to her professor with a wan smile. “Notice where they’re staring?”
Zoe only took a moment to respond. She had probably realized sooner, but had to brush a lock of hair back behind her ear first. “What did you do?”
“Nothing more than you saw me do. Which is probably the problem. But we don’t have the luxury of standing around. Even dormant,” Eva said, pointing towards the sole remaining avatar, “I don’t want that on Earth and I don’t want the portals overhead remaining open.” With determination, she turned towards Catherine and made a ‘come hither’ gesture with her full hand.
“That is something I can agree–”
Zoe cut herself off with a hissing gasp. Eva started to turn only to feel a slight pinch in her chest. Looking down, she found a gleaming silver blade stretching out from her chest. Right where her heart was. Black blood ran down the fuller of the blade until it reached the tip where it dripped off, splattering against the stone floor.
“Huh.”
Really? Our demon hunter is STILL trying to be relevant?
I think it might be the doll
Totally the doll
Which, the blood tube was another target of the tentacles.
Should this be “Speaking of which,” or something?
More tentacles scraped along the surface of the ritual circle, trying to pull itself away.
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“itself” doesn’t fit here – a reflexive pronoun should be referring to the subject “tentacles”, and be “themselves” to match plural
Everything else sheered straight through the
sheared
the stubs of legs that was all that remained
were
Her hands clasped to her mouth.
She clasped her hands to her mouth.
who was absolutely notdismissed
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who paused to steel a glance at
steal
Thanks!
Eva killed void and the Doll is here for revenge. 😉
Whoever it is, I doubt Eva will really be slowed by much – who needs a heart if you control blood?
I really want to see how the demons now see Eva.
And I still want to know what the difference in education was between Brakket and other schools and why Genoa thought Brakkets way of teaching was “better”.
And what happened to the Elysium order and the reforms.
And what Ylva is actually doing, if her actions are sanctioned and/or she has a contract.
And what’s going on with Des, the haugbui and Sawyer – and the woman from one of the academies that was briefly pointed out.
And how Sayer came in contact with the Enigmas and learned to control them, what he meant exactly that he got a boon from a power. (probably related, but can’t be sure)
And what the nun and demon hunter think about wtf they just witnessed.
And why the demon hunter has void metal, and what that anti-demon metal actually is.
And what/how much Jordan actually knows.
And of course the main plot as well, but I’m sure that we’re going to see more about that soon. 🙂
The doll, if it is her, is probably attacking because Eva (who is now more demon than human) “convoked a demon” when she tried to summon Void, which is a crime for the demons.
Eva didn’t have another treatment since she last saw the doll, did she? Or am I forgetting a treatment? So the same “rules don’t apply to her” should still be true – her changes happened after Void got summoned. And Void claimed that he wouldn’t break his own rules, that should prevent him from getting Eva to summon him if the rules don’t allow it.
A lot points to a doll: The lack of blood sight forwarning, the color of the blade I think (didn’t check, but silver sounds right), the execution style attack (though that the attack didn’t hit the head might be a counterpoint).
The why though… no idea, I was just throwing out a random not really serious guess.
Oh, we’re doing this today?
Still want to see or know about;
Who hired Sawyer and Weilks to do the job that saw them attacking Brakket. Eva being vindictive about that always felt like being stabbed by someone, then hating the knife they used to do it but not the person.
Who did Sawyer sell her parts to? Is it the same shadowman that hired them? I thought for awhile it was Anderson because it is a shady way to further his agenda, but it never substantiated.
Are we going to see the Florida people again?
Why was there never any blowback or inquiry’s about Eva’s string of murders there? Zoe and Wayne are watching for just this kind of behavior, ostensibly, and she wasn’t subtle with those gangsters, to say nothing of other investigators.
Catherine can teleport anywhere with infernal walk, but none of the demons ever do it past book two, relying on Death based teleporting for situations they could solve with their own ability, even in emergencies.
Will the magical government ever do anything? Or the community at large? Because to date they have done nothing at all, including the super double clandestine secret commando squads they have on retainer (from one of the extra chapters).
Tony Burnside confrontations, good or bad or whatever.
Any of the demonology class doing anything.
Devon Adventures!
Wayne Adventures!
Eva interacting with any of the other students, including mysterious fainting girl.
Eva interacting with the News people, she is kind of the poster girl for the agenda and the biggest deal in town, and the students aren’t subtle about it.
Eva hasn’t learned that Demonic Basic Package, even if it isn’t automatically installed by Void she has plenty of cowed demons around to teach her the stuff, and Catherine at least definitely knows it all.
Shalise getting her moment of showing her growth in character and skill.
Why does the Carnivean want to summon the faery queen? Is the faery queen a Power or just a strong type thing?
Eva visits a popular magical area (Diagon Alley).
… more Tony Burnside some more… har har I really do like that character.
BTW great resolution to the ritual! Cliffhangers Galore!
I can’t say that I don’t agree with your list, though some of it I’d rather consider a side/extra story :>
The Florida drug dealer situation was actually the thing the made me look for hanging plot threads, stupid of me to forget that.
Well, I’m looking forward to more Void Domain!
I don’t see the justification for your view about about the possible backers of the necromancers. Wasn’t their primary goal the nuns’ eyes? Was there ever any indication that they got any outside orders/requests specific to Eva? Even if there was some backer/buyer who created demand for body parts in general, it still makes sense for Eva to primarily blame the necromancers for what they did to her.
They wanted an auger’s skull, but you are right that they never explicitly state they are there on orders. I assumed they were because Sawyer always seemed to snark about money to Eva and spoke of things as “part of the plan”, like there was a larger artifice at work. I am more inclined to believe he was there not only of his own ambition because in my opinion things happening by design trumps things happening because of serendipity, making for tighter narrative, clearer motivations, and avenues for further plot progression.
I thought Eva’s hydraulic spider fingers were naturally clenched and she had to make an effort to open them? They shouldn’t ever be limp.
Personally I rather doubt her limbs are much like Arachne’s anymore, given the massive changes she has no doubt not taken note of thanks to the ritual.
Even after the first part of summoning void she seemed to have become far more of a demon, and after routing void directly through her veins I would expect she’s become something more.
Is it intentional that what the demons are staring at is declared vaguely? I assume they’re staring at Eva but they could be staring at Life/where Void was, but it feels a bit unclear the way you wrote it.
I’d guess they are staring at Eva, her aura is probably near blinding after her transformation and they watched her refuse to bow and them argue in the presence of 2 Powers before corrupting an entire plane of existence.